Reviews:Strong Bads Ace Investigations/z1

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Out of character  
By Badstar at Zoo977

I don't really like this much. You wrote Strong Bad way out of character. First of all, he wouldn't help anyone as long as there was something in it for him. Second of all... he's just too smart. Sounds like a dumb flaw, but its true. He wouldn't come up with a logical reason for something. He'd throw out an over the top, outrageous theory, probably involving explosions and violence. I just don't see him as an Edgeworth kind of guy. Personally, if anything, he'd be like MacGyver. Finally... too nice. This kind of connects with the first one. Like I said, Strong Bad would probably think helping Marrissa is a waste of time unless he gained something out of it. Also, Strong Bad apologizes to someone at one point. Thats something Strong Bad would rarely do. He probably wouldn't give a crap that he just upset someone. ...Oh, and he'd probably find a dead body pretty awesome. Fix up some character flaws, and you got something decent. ...Oh, and maybe some more Homsar.

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Okay, I made changes based on this. Thanks! Zo977^Spring!

Alright, thats a good improvement. My opinion has gone from "Don't like it" to "meh". Like I said, I just don't see Strong Bad in an Ace Attorney scenario. It just doesn't work to me. Take Strong Bad finding contradictions for example. I don't think he'd be able to find mistakes that easily. He'd probably just press statements over and over until someone else points something out. Then he'd try and take credit for it. But that can get really old. Sorry, but I just don't think Strong Bad is the right type of character for something like this.