Talk:Hold the Line: Behind the Brigades of Strong Badia
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e doe a lot of this, and my partner has done nothing. I would like him to get here so we can work out problems he might have with the plot. But if he doesn't get here by today, I'm finishing this thing without him. Seriously 15:47, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
It would make our eyes bleed less if you changed the page's title to just "Hold the Line". You don't need the subtitle, cast, and subsubtitle in the title! Do you know why I called my email show "thatkidsam.muffin" instead of "thatkidsam.muffin - That email show you might of heard of, starring Thatkidsam and Icreature and Brent and Lawrence and Hyperma and Nocturne and Opal and Mushroom Monster and Dark Lawrence and ThatkidSamus and Yeoldesam and Lawson IV and The Leet and Fashionmore Henchmen and Freezepop and blink-182 and Sephiroth and..." --THATKIDSAM 16:26, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
- I still think it's better this way. It's really not that hard to read. Plus, this way it sounds more like a documentary. Seriously 17:06, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
- Fine, I'll move it to "Hold the line: Behind the brigades of Strong Badia". If that's not good enough, I don't know what is. Seriously 17:12, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
Ownership
As anyone on the wiki knows, I'm leaving. And not comin' back for a while. My partner is close to nonexiatent on this porject. I really would like him to finish this project so it will someday be completed, but there's a hefty chance that that won't happen. If he does not make some editing by friday, I'm letting people take ownership of this, prefereably Super Sam or Joshua. Seriously 00:01, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
- Ojay, He's here. We're gonna finish this thang. Seriously (Too lazy to sign in)
Yes!
I think me and Homsarroks did a pretty good job on this! We're pretty awesome! I'm so modest. Seriously 22:05, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
FotW Goal
To give an idea of your goal, email shows (all-written) have about 10 emails about this long before winning FotW, and usually more. - 
Joshua
22:59, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
Note: This is for Homsarroks and me to discuss, please dot not comment on this subject.
Plot
Is there anything that you are concerned about in the plot?
I think that the plow is fine. I can't really think of how else I would have had it. You did well.
Writing
Is there anything that can be spruced up?
Other that a few spelling and grammar errors, I think that it is fine. We'll run it through a fine-toothed Vocabulon to work out any of the kinks.
Overall
Do you think we did a good job?
I think that we did a very good job. If you think anything needs doing, just let me know.
Homsarroks, answer these questions when you can. We can perfect this if we find out what's bothering us and make it better. Seriously 00:32, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
- Cool. I've already nominated it for Fanstuff of the week. If there is anything else troubling you, please do not hesitate to take it into your own hands. Youdidn't get much of a chance to edit on this. Seriously 03:23, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
Sequel-ish...thing
Homsarroks, We've got a problem. The people say that our story is way too short. I've started up a sequel. Work on this anytime you want. Seriously 22:51, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
great but...
why'd you kill off painting and frank? really, i dont care about homestar, but w/e. -Homsar7 from the hrwiki
