Reviews:Zarel Emails/16
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Awkward, really 
By Skub at 18:32, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
I don't know—this email just seems way too injoke-y and most of the humor (especially stuff that has to do with Mega Man) seems really, really forced. To me, good humor is: A.) ice cream and B.) not dependent on prior, off-website knowledge; and if it IS off-website, it should at the very least be easily accessible, such as a reference to a popular movie or something. Making a reference to a friend's character from FurAffinity isn't quite as good.
I mean, you're definitely improving—don't get me wrong, this is a serious improvement from that old one about the dog you once made—but this one was kind of a dud.
